Honestly, this is great. I could read this just from the character interactions, the characters feel three-dimensional and real, it's simply enjoyable. And yes, as some of the other reviews noted, the grammar and language is simply great, and enjoyable to read. The story so far is interesting, even though we're quite early into it. The only point I deducted is from world-building, but I suspect it's slowly being built up, in quite a sneaky way. (I approve). Now, the only thing lacking is more chapters where we get to see more outside the MCs family.
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