I like this story but why did u put the hero character as a child.when u put at a teenage character its become more interesting by adding some business achievement,face slapping,and interesting college life etc...,,yyou will have to add all kind of interesting achievements or situation by continuing this story and also make the hero soon become a youth not a child because here after child part may give some boring feel to continue or read this story.
Rain Butterfly Dances To The End Of The World
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