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idea and plot are interesting. But surely need improvement on naration and grammar. well pratice make perfect, i won't critize too much on naration since its part of process. for English and grammar i suggest author to utilize some ai apps like quillbot to rephrase or grammar checking. im sure it can help a lot to improve the quality. keep going!
Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System
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Grammarly surely helping. But sometimes it isn't enough. As a fellow Indonesian (just realized when i saw a note on your other novel) and your novel fans, i want to share with you. So im a writer myself, and as english isnt our main language so i did use grammarly too. but most of the times it isnt enough, it just doesnt flow correctly. but well obviously its because we arent native speaker. So i use quilbot and chatgpt to rephrase and editing. It really help a lot, maybe you can give it a try too. btw good luck, i wish a successfull journey on your novel đ
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