Review Detail of Dominique_Kirkman in I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)

I don’t like how like how mc and Marceline stick together until they force to split up and they won’t be able to see each other again that one of them thinks the other one them dies and the searth each other never find each othe later when they’re like hundred years later they meet again , but they friend but don’t really need each other good help when needed sorry for the rant it it just idk I just think Idea for something but it kinda feel forced because I don’t know to to describe its smooth reading then one the very forced