The story has potential but the characters are just 2D and even tho MC has infinite intelligence, he is stupid or should I say naive. There are also many grammar mistakes and the writing is just a mess. Sometimes I don't even understand what are you saying tho I have only read 7 chapters because there is only 7 chapters but I hope you can improve your writing skills as the story progress.
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