Leaving my mark her for the future... This story is great!! The way this story is written makes me feel like the Author is on cocaine(not in a bad way). The chapters feel swiftly written with the few grammar mistakes here and there, and the main character has such an interesting and wild character that she seems rather entertaining. In fact, many of the next characters feel like that based on their dialogues. The dialogues feel alive, but aim more to the aggressive and direct side, which tells the emotions of the characters vividly. So, in conclusion, it's a gist of good and bad. I'm not sure how the story will continue, but for now, everything seems good except for the few grammar mistakes in the "telling".
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