Review Detail of sm_yesa in Born Again(BL)

I'm not into BL but I endured and read it, well, what can I ssay, it's good. Here's some of my comments. I'm not into third POV but how the story was delivered is good, the quality of writing and grammar is also satisfying , what only needs to be improved is the quality of feelings of characters, making it more relatable I think will do the trick, whatever you may come up is fine. Keep up the good work