Noticable language problems, I get the sense that it's translated, gives me wuxia vibes. Names for things are much like a toddler has smashed two random generated words together which really hurts the world building 'deaths valhalla'. Nothing new tries to set character up as an underdog but the power scaling is off which means the book has no suspense or gritt. Additionally the Mecha genre is over used and the author would really need to bring something unique which they do not.
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