Review Detail of ShuYme in The Lost Returned

Its a fun story, the writing is okay, there are some Words that are misspelled and the structure of the dialogue is a bit chaotic sometimes. The main problem I have with the story is that the structure of it is very chaotic, flashbacks randomly, missing information which the author does give out eventually but at a later chapter in order to further the story however it’s done quite poorly so in my opinion it just seems disorderly and chaotic. Now the premis behind the flashbacks and other the withholding information thing seems to be to add some mystery to the novel, and it very well might have, had it been done well. It’s stil a fun story tho better than most story’s on webnovel but worse than others.