Review Detail of Rin_Nurnia in Zurong- Quest for Eternal Fire

Rather than a novel, this book is more like a script. There is one question I want to ask and also suggestions I want to give. Question: Why didn't you write it in usual novel way? Why you used ([...]) symbol for the characters action's? (there's also one question which I already asked in the comment section) Suggestion: Instead of ("Kaala"), you can use ('Kaala') This symbol ("...") is commonly used for dialogues. For the actions part, you don't need to use the ([...]) symbol. Because if you used this in one paragraph, it was confusing to read.