Review Detail of charreos in I Guess, Another World is Really Different

it was bad, had high hopes for this but its pretty much unreadable, the grammar is awful and the MC is unlikeable, it physically hurt me to read this, if the author reads this here are tips: 1. practice english, how people talk and how sentences are made 2. start to think about little details, having him beat to death with broken bones means he needs to survive with broken bones and not suddenly healed after a time skip 3. the plot is cliche and boring, it feels like every other power fantasy with cliche characters and cliche place, open your horizons and search for a what could be, what if the thug was accually a good person that acts like he does because he needs money for his sick mother? thats pretty much it, I have more problems with this but these are the 3 big ones I think you should follow. until a full rewrite I will say its not worth reading