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I was very excited to read a Wise Man’s Grandchild fic, but unfortunately I found myself wholely disappointed. There are several major problems with the story with the first being how cliche the start is and how rapidly the author frees the MC from difficulty. We could’ve had several chapters establishing the world and having the MC struggle to survive his poverty and situation while he slowly becomes less naive. But no, instead we grant the MC the second problem I have with the story: an OP system. His beginner pack was all of Adam’s abilities from record of ragnarok, not to mention in a world that is pretty easy to survive in compared to a lot of other fantasy settings, enough said. Third, the author leaves constant plot holes and utilized plot armor. The MC will get nearly beat to death from talking to someone and suddenly next chapter he has no injury and is somehow getting uncommon information from chatting to villagers. Lastly, the grammar is very bad, not utterly unreadable but enough that it feels like it was written by a child. I cannot reccomend this, 3.2/10.