Review Detail of Spanyco in A Swallow's Path

It won't be a criticism but a compliment. I love skyrim and the witcher, but unfortunately the fanfics about these worlds are almost nil, and the few that have either been dropped, or are just too horrible. You're doing a great job on character development, don't mind the comments that talk about slow development, don't rush an artist when he's working. If you feel that 50, 100, 150 or more chapters are necessary for the story to develop your way, then just do it.