Review Detail of Sigheti in The Shadows Between Us

You present your reader with a charming story, and a lovable protagonist. You write quite well, although you make some grammar mistakes here and there. It doesn’t really obstruct reading the story, but I think it might polish the story some more. I did try to correct it here and there. It happens quite often that you mix present and past tenses. Overall, a nice story that captures the imagination. Well done!