Overall The story is very interesting, new concept and fresh plot, all the scenes are Well written, very creative description. This book has potential. You have done a great job author keep it up, I wish you the best :)
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LIKEWalekumasalam dear, sure i will check the book, Also you can check my ongoing book " Queen of Slaves" If you like
Flower_spirit_66:Assalamualaikum Sahar Iqbal, I would like to recommend you" The One In Me" it's a good one please give it a try