Review Detail of LowPriorityCitizen in Games Of Thrones: The Lost Hero (ENG)

Overall story is good, but the dialogues are weird. MC training in sword with his sister from 2/3 years old is 100% a retard choice, why?? also if you want MC to be in the story very early, like just after Robert's rebellion, make him older!! so as not to make a 5 years old boy acting old and traveling to the Martell for training, very weird... but i also know that you probably had hard time doing that because in the end MC will be too old and cant get the girls, right? im 95% that's your reason. imagine a 30/35 years old courting Arya, lmao because the only woman his age would probably be cersei anyway I'll try to read more