Review Detail of DeadReeper in Rewritten.
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This novel is bad the writer goes back and forth on what the guy tells us so much a note of quistable writer should be placed instead of a quistable mc. The words I'm about say were once thought never to cross my lips as I view them in same like as saying one should always nerff and never buff but this story needs a overhaul and "rewite!!!!" that was awful so bad I need bleach for my fingers after typing that. For anyone ? why I wrote this someone tell me when naruto and percy jackson combined worlds. Anyone still not getting it the writer keeps telling us the world is PJ. The massive changes for no reason just add on like one min Hestia is still good then she is like the rest. Why Hera would want the underworld is never said as all the gods even the og Hades hated it. I do get the big surprise is going to be probably the fates having something to do with it but that feels like bad writing or an accuse for not having one. Haven't checked but don't think the fates or people with power like theirs could affect gods fully and only worked indirectly by affecting things around them like make a god die by giving something the fate that it will kill one but then a god has the opposite happen in that nothing but that can kill them and even then it takes massive amount of power.
Rewritten.
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I'm the same with the rewrite part which is why it was hard to say that. I wanted to make it known I did like the start like up till the part where the 3 realms were split without him would have been a 4 but after it starts to sadly be chiped at piece by piece till it felt like what I wrote in my review.
SnowApathie:Thanks for the review, sorry that you didn't like it. As for rewriye, I will probably do it but without stopping the novel because I hate when books go on 6 months hiatus for rewrite. This book was PJ but then when I rewrote the first chapter I had an idea to combine many worlds and all, naruto would't be the only one. Thanks again for having taking hour time to write a complete review for why you don't like the story and didn't just comment that the story was trash.
Thanks for the review, sorry that you didn't like it. As for rewriye, I will probably do it but without stopping the novel because I hate when books go on 6 months hiatus for rewrite. This book was PJ but then when I rewrote the first chapter I had an idea to combine many worlds and all, naruto would't be the only one. Thanks again for having taking hour time to write a complete review for why you don't like the story and didn't just comment that the story was trash.