Review Detail of Galanar in Rewritten.

OK. I will be honest. I could not finish the first paragraph. Not because it wasn't good, but simply because it felt like a data dump to me. The writing quality could be a little better (There were a few typos). I gave 3 stars to updates cuz I don't know how often you do. From what I garnered from what I read, the story wasn't progressing. Character design, well, your gods are well described. World background was plentiful (too much if I'm honest) I'm sure the rest is good, but I couldn't bring myself to finish first :( Keep up the good work though :)