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Review Detail of Majer3 in just another roomie MOVED

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This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Olrait, decadent suggar dady opinions coming through as requested xDD Back to the mega serious SCARY professional business of art director review. Synopsis: Dayymm drama starts at the synopsis already/5 Copyright: act from 1988/5, I suggest to use copyright classifications instead either some copyright classification or one of the creative commons https://creativecommons.org/ by this choice you can pretty much dictate everything of the use and tell it only by a single line of text in form of classification. Example “Furggelen afterglow” by Lukas Schlagenhauf is licensed under CC BY-ND 2.0. drama: sleazy bag that gropes/5, maybe they marry in chapter 2. Never give up hope but when it goes wrong its just nope. Legal issue drama 1/5 its common sense to battle for a good reason against stupid law breaking scumbaggery people who abuse their landlord powers. There has to be evident real reason. Just making a lawyer call them is typically the best. They can tell in perfect way how idiotic it would be according to law :) Style of writing is the kind of hectic phased dialogue driven not a lot love for world building kind of thing. The slower the story goes more possibilities there are for this. I personally love 2-3 pages of info dumps to the autistic perfection. mmmmm tasty. :D Otherwise, this reminds me of English soap opera dialogue+ scenery plan writing. Not what I typically read but these things have immense audience also so what do I know. To give benefit of the doubt at least there is more flesh lust and action going on than in your normal merry sue run of the mill milk and cookies at 2 pm kind of lullaby laziness endless TV series with laughing track on it.

just another roomie MOVED

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haha thank you so much 😁😁 like said before any opinion helps to be a better writter 😁🥰