Review Detail of sxliih in Wings of Redemption: Light & Dark

an attempt at reviewing a story. Writing Quality: 5/5 - i didn't find any trouble reading this. it was in first person, but nevertheless smoothly done. Stability of Updates: 2/5 - it takes days before a chapter is uploaded. it's not enough to have one chapter every 5 days or so. this needs to change. Story Development: 4/5 - the story just began, and it's swiftly developing itself with an intriguing setting. Character Design: 5/5 - very much likable. the main character, however, is still in that phase where he would rather have one wife, even though it's his nature to have sex with multiple women, and also might cause him to die if he doesn't do anything sexual. of course, this will change, right? the characters that were introduced to us were very much alive and likable. the main character also has a way with words, being able to make supernatural creatures blush and stutter. he just found out he is a lust primordial, so he may be ignorant and naive about the way it works in Zemoria, but that will surely change if given enough time to develop himself. World Background: 4/5 - we have not seen much because he has only now entered the world of Zemoria and is still somewhere in the city at the moment. the world of Zemoria is a vast realm that has many terrifying creatures roaming in it, meaning he has enough time to explore the world. -- i very much like this story and would like it to not be dropped, please. the chapter updates are the most worrying because it might come to it that the author may not have any time to write chapters in the future, causing this story to be dropped. anyway, great story. please continue writing it.