Review Detail of Blackwater in Highschool Of The Dead: Shiro's Cheat

overall not bad but The Characters and the overall development are a bit iffy. The characters are a bit one dimensional overall, they are only defined by there most extreme trait so far and that is being anoying or unreasonable for the most part .The MC is only marginal better he is growing but i would have liked the MC to be a more coolheaded and collected charter to at least Balance it out. The Story world is already messed up enough the only reason it even is as popular as it is comes from the Characters, the Harem and the eye candy, because the plot of the original itself is at best c-rate entertainment. But so far the story has strip away most of the Positives of the Plot and replaced it with very little. The world building is pretty AU with the OCs and all, I'm splitt if that will be better or worse in the long run but it's ok, the system, the extra players etc. are something I'm really not that much of a fan off, mainly because I'm someone that likes to have One Main character with special powers and not a dozen, even more so in a Fanfic, it's not terrible so far but yeah it's not really my thing. like i said overall it's not bad so far, and there is potential here but i really hope you have a solid plan because zombie worlds with systems thend to end in a dead end sooner or later, because either you make the zombies massively stronger and evolve them to balance things, you hard cap the system, you start some kingdom building and go the drama route like Walking Dead or you just leave the world alltogether at least about 99% of the storys go this way.