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ThatGuyYeahThatGuy
ThatGuyYeahThatGuyLv41yrThatGuyYeahThatGuy

Don't really make review, but here's my thought. Yes, the MC is a coward and makes some times dumb decisions. BUT as said he is, or was, "a normal highschool student" and a human before all. And the author wants to make the story realistic so just think "he is human and humans are bound to make mistakes". All I wish is that the MC learn from his mistake, which some time he don't. And that makes me sad. But all in all, good story but can and have the potential to be better.

Highschool Of The Dead: Shiro's Cheat

UrekSenpa1

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UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1AuthorUrekSenpa1

Thanks a lot man. I'll do my best to make Shiro take right decisions.

ThatGuyYeahThatGuy
ThatGuyYeahThatGuyLv4ThatGuyYeahThatGuy

You're welcome. Even if he do not make the right decision, as long as he learn from them, it's all right. He is a "cheat" character as you introduce him so he should "evolve" to be better. As the story is only at it's begining, improvement are still possible. And as I said before, this story as potential. The MC is not a classic reincarnator. The plot is not the same as the anime (mostly) so no copy paste. And FINALY and MOST IMPORTANTLY this is not a HAREM. Harem brokes good story, at least that's my opinion. Any way, Good story bro/sis. Continue 👊👍

UrekSenpa1:Thanks a lot man. I'll do my best to make Shiro take right decisions.
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ThatGuyYeahThatGuy
ThatGuyYeahThatGuyLv4ThatGuyYeahThatGuy

If I were to critic, I would say that the MC do not put to much thought into surviving but more into leveling. Which is understandable as the world he lived in just suddenly change and he decides to focus on something else, concidering the world as a game to coppe with it. But, if this continue sadly enough, the story will get predictable and boring. What he would need is either to change his vision or a reality check. Character development is important.

UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1AuthorUrekSenpa1

It's a bro. And I'm sticking to my initial idea. no harem. Thanks alot bro.

ThatGuyYeahThatGuy:You're welcome. Even if he do not make the right decision, as long as he learn from them, it's all right. He is a "cheat" character as you introduce him so he should "evolve" to be better. As the story is only at it's begining, improvement are still possible. And as I said before, this story as potential. The MC is not a classic reincarnator. The plot is not the same as the anime (mostly) so no copy paste. And FINALY and MOST IMPORTANTLY this is not a HAREM. Harem brokes good story, at least that's my opinion. Any way, Good story bro/sis. Continue 👊👍
UrekSenpa1
UrekSenpa1AuthorUrekSenpa1

ohh, I totally understand. Now that he's met up with Takashi's team, He'll relax a bit and stuff's going to happen.

ThatGuyYeahThatGuy:If I were to critic, I would say that the MC do not put to much thought into surviving but more into leveling. Which is understandable as the world he lived in just suddenly change and he decides to focus on something else, concidering the world as a game to coppe with it. But, if this continue sadly enough, the story will get predictable and boring. What he would need is either to change his vision or a reality check. Character development is important.