Review Detail of Sweet_Vanilla553 in World End: The Successor's Contract

Hello, I am here to review this. Honestly, I am gonna recommend this one. While I was reading I wanted to tell you something. At first, I noticed that in the first chapter, you have add a author's notice in the first chapter. But you don't have to do it there You have a section to add author's thought. When you write choose that option and write your notices there. So it won,t bother to the story. I noticed a few mistakes with Pnctual marks. But it's not that remarkable. So you can be more careful... Anyways, The plot is flowing smoothly and I think the story will get more and more better in the future. So recommended! Keep going author, 👍