Premise is interesting and writing quality is good. sadly the MC is a pushover and with other ocs/tramigrators it gets bad... especially since he has basically no further growth after the first 30 years and basically even regressed and got weaker... even with a system and a skill like great sage.... also he forgot kinda he started as a necromancer and mage early... no usage in any kind... add in he seems more like a weaker addon for the additional trasmigrator and well.... no real future for the story sadly even so the potential was great and there...
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