Review Detail of UnedeadKing23 in MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

I really liked your book in beginning however after the turtle Guy it got stupid and now shit the story that had promised is now shit you need to back and rewrite the story form there I was hopping it was going to get better but I got worst and going down hill fast I read first book loved now this not so much it. don’t really take look at story and read it self as read mid set and not as author you really need to do this and rewrite because it crap story now please i am begging to do this for the good story .