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the concept is good but the execution is soo terribly bad . i love an evil mc or a profit oriented mc that does what ever it take to achieve his goal but forcing the plot to limit an evil mc is just bad . if you wanna make an evil mc he need to be in control of everything he need to be 1000 steps over his enemy not some mc who only react never attack . btw the story flow is so slow with one relevant chapter in every ten.

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Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel

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yep... and that's how we know you dis not reach 100 chapters... watch and observe his growth until he reaches a point of absolute control. remember, he his challenging Fate itself... LOL