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theyasuke_
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the novel good but I'll just say the things I don't like, even tho the mc is the author of this book, I find it weird that he seemingly has knowledge of every forbidden evil ritual everytime and cause he's the author he can also rune speak?? I have never seen a novel explain such things in detail so I personally think it's annoying. then there's this trend where mc is too forgetful, little did he know that blah blah blah, like bruhhh, he's ruthless and doesn't confirm kills? he's an overthinking manipulator and he forgot something? I swear it's annoying, don't get me started on the beef he has with anyone and everyone

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Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel

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Dere_Isaac
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thanks man.. I guess I have to say this in the novel again.... he dreamt of this world. he literally felt the life and pain of the MC of his book for many years every night he slept. like I said, it's like knowing the ABC... will u have to relearn it again??? He experienced the world through the eyes, ears and feelings of the original MC. That's why he can Rune speak. Also, I made him Manipulative cause I believe that's the peak of true evil. killing is not enough. one must be able to extract humans for their worth. But I still wanted to maintain the fact that he is human and still makes mistakes sometimes. Imagine Light from Death Note. even he made mistakes... Also Fang yuan from RI made mistakes. thanks again for the review... I'll ensure to add your observations...[img=update]

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Dere_Isaac
Dere_IsaacAuthorDere_Isaac

lastly, for every time he had used a ritual, he has also spent fate pints for a memory booster. this tells I that even he forgets...

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theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4theyasuke_

then I must have missed the part where he dreamt it, my bad

Dere_Isaac:thanks man.. I guess I have to say this in the novel again.... he dreamt of this world. he literally felt the life and pain of the MC of his book for many years every night he slept. like I said, it's like knowing the ABC... will u have to relearn it again??? He experienced the world through the eyes, ears and feelings of the original MC. That's why he can Rune speak. Also, I made him Manipulative cause I believe that's the peak of true evil. killing is not enough. one must be able to extract humans for their worth. But I still wanted to maintain the fact that he is human and still makes mistakes sometimes. Imagine Light from Death Note. even he made mistakes... Also Fang yuan from RI made mistakes. thanks again for the review... I'll ensure to add your observations...[img=update]
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theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4theyasuke_

good novel

Dere_Isaac:thanks man.. I guess I have to say this in the novel again.... he dreamt of this world. he literally felt the life and pain of the MC of his book for many years every night he slept. like I said, it's like knowing the ABC... will u have to relearn it again??? He experienced the world through the eyes, ears and feelings of the original MC. That's why he can Rune speak. Also, I made him Manipulative cause I believe that's the peak of true evil. killing is not enough. one must be able to extract humans for their worth. But I still wanted to maintain the fact that he is human and still makes mistakes sometimes. Imagine Light from Death Note. even he made mistakes... Also Fang yuan from RI made mistakes. thanks again for the review... I'll ensure to add your observations...[img=update]
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