The MC is ruthless, and acts only for the benefit, but the author is forgetting the following, the demonic dao is aimed at the benefits, and beyond that be unrestricted. So, you can make the MC sleep with a woman without deflecting the MC's dao, the problem is sacrificing your interests for hers, and falling in love. Another point that I consider a flaw is the speed of the novel, 86 chapters, and the MC is still a mortal, how many chapters will it take for MC to have a decent cultivation at this rate, about 1000?
Dere_Isaac
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LIKEI understand, but the plot is so slow that even I, who am used to slow novels, can't take it anymore, now imagine the other readers. I have a feeling you nerf the MC at every opportunity just to have an excuse to do more chapters without advancing the plot, all to profit more
Dere_Isaac:hmmm....I made it in such a way that is difficulty to climb to the top, is experienced by all...cause when u see his strength, u'll also feel his fulfillment ...
Naaa....I'm not that jobless 😁😁😁. But then again,the book has not really gone that far, I'm just a detailed person. and the MC is growing .... even you can see and feel it. He is peeling his way to a great future...his achievements are relatable and his problems are even worse....but if you think it's too slow, I'll speed things up.
Daoist0ccPtW:I understand, but the plot is so slow that even I, who am used to slow novels, can't take it anymore, now imagine the other readers. I have a feeling you nerf the MC at every opportunity just to have an excuse to do more chapters without advancing the plot, all to profit more
Maybe I'm exaggerating, but your writing always reminds me of the author of Immortal Mansion, the novel is excellent, but very detailed. In that novel the MC advanced 2 realms of cultivation in 700 chapters, a total of 2.7 million words. The problem is that the novel is so good that I can't stop reading in both cases haha
Dere_Isaac:hmmm....I made it in such a way that is difficulty to climb to the top, is experienced by all...cause when u see his strength, u'll also feel his fulfillment ...