Review Detail of DarkTiding in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)
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Besides what we already know about the Marvel Universe, there is no world building or environmental descriptions. The initial character background is what you woild expect, so no problem there. Everything that happens from the point the MC merges with the other two identities is garbage. I can say that as an America I love the works that I find on Webnovel, but then I find fanfictions like this one. The english grammer is a disgrace. I have absolutely no idea what a major park of each chapter is trying to convey. The way additional characters are introduced is subpar at best and that is if you can understand the information leading to the character introduction. The way i would describe the MC is if you took a child, maybe about 10 years old, gave him his favorite villains powers and placed him in another world. There is nothing logical about this fanfiction. If you know about Darkseid then you know that only the strongest of females have the chance of producing his offspring. But this is a fanfic so I get that we want to be with our favorite characters. Overall I have only read about 6 chapters and I can not stomach the horrible butchering of the english language. If you are going to make a fanfic in another langage, then do so with the ability to not come off as a kindergartener throwing a tantrum. I would have probably made it a little further in your novel if not for the unreadable grammer/english, poor story line, unrecognizable plot (just plan wish fulfillment novel), and subpar ability to describe anything going on. I do believe you have some nice ideas that are worth being put on Webnovel. You just do not, at this time, have the proper ability to deliver it in a way the native American english speakers would be willing to consume. The first thing that stops me from investing in a fanfic is poor understanding of the English language and the excuse that english is not someone’s first language. It would be like me going to another country doing something bad and using the excuse that i did not know to disperse all wrong doing. But that is enough of a tangent.
AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)
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I don't know what to say to this you had blown my mind always but I understand all of it as a follower comic reader and a big fan of it, But most of you said is slowly taking care of the world is always a late need so I do it after 50 chapters and the 2 characters didn't combine together until changer 70 you would see the world-building after it
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