Review Detail of ASWANG in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

Man this novel is CLAPPED, the grammar really needs to be improve. I can not immerse myself to the story because of how difficult it is to understand the sentences. I've read your Zeus novel I'm only at chapter 21 and its getting to taxing to read further because of how awful it is. I hope you don't get offended by this, my opinion on this novel might change so if it improves I will right another review!