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the idea of the story is good only that the author can't write, the grammar is average but the worst thing is the chapter there are a lot of POVs, the story is continuously interrupted by presenting the story of the characters, I honestly don't care nothing just fillers, if I wanted to know the story of some characters I went to the Wiki and looked for them, the author seems to block, skip and hang up the story randomly, nothing is understood, at the end of the chapter we talk about curiosities and things about the author want and are totally filler, the story starts by repeating the same words that are at the end of the previous chapter and is very annoying, the story itself has nothing but slaughter an empire in 20 words and break free from prison and do the idiot flaunting the powers on earth, the story is full of explanations that are repeated several times in the same chapter and the following ones, honestly good idea but bad execution, i don't even talk about how he wants already à leave marvel when there has been a few days, I read the harem tag and it has no development with women and the first 30 chapters talk about which ones he will put and if there is any marvel girl he forgot he also talks about the rules of the omniverse and how it works but how did he figure it out? because? the story is disconnected! How does she know that Queen Never Queen can't see her future when she has only talked about it privately with other people?
AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)
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the story is a let down the marvel arc is full of inner thoughts, show of strength, explanations about the life of some characters appearing for 1 chapter! dxd had powers increased endlessly, most hyporboles dxd became as if they are real powers, mc disrespects the rules and history of the verses and ignores them without explanation, darkseid from the power to absorb life energy had the power to absorb any power and evolve it, the fatherbox has become OP with parademons that make leaps of quality to the universe level, I think the author doesn't know what to do without talking about all the POVs, story jumps or like half of the chapter are things that the author writes to talk about some things, the comments area isn't it? each chapter has a few lines from the previous chapter, marvel characters know DC and should know darkseid but don't treat him as if he's unknown