Review Detail of TheMainPlagiaris in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

The sentence construction is really bad. I would have been ok if its just the grammar as long as its readable. I mean I've been use to reading machine translated novel for a while now and personally English is like my 3rd language so its abit understandable why the paragraphs are like that. But this is just terrible. I could see the authors love and drive as they wrote this. You could see how he likes the characters and has deep knowledge of each characters personality and such. Its the only thing that is keeping me from dropping this and ofcourse our lord savior Darkseid. But you have to admit grammar, sentence construction. How each characters conversation goes is really bad. I would suggest you get a proof reader or use grammarly or ask anyone from your discord to help you with the fanfic you are writing.