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Dretno
DretnoLv31yrDretno

A solid 4.2 from my end. The the power of the mc in itself is very interesting. The villain part piqued my interest in this story. I hope you don't ruin it with harem, (I've seen many novels be destroyed by such). [This is a genuine review from me] The writing quality is good considering English is the author's 3rd language. There are some mistakes here and there but nothing that will break the immersion. 4/5 Not much to be seen about the plot in the earlier chaps but it gets interesting enough. (might seem cliche to some) 4/5 The mc's character is great considering his villain side. The author has tried to display him as smart but needs a little more depth. 4/5 The updating stability has been good as far as I am concerned. 5/5 The world background is a little overused, the gate appearing theme which has been used a lot on this site (same as solo leveling). So to some readers it might seem boring but it is changed here and there, so it is acceptable. (4/5) Overall a great read to invest your time in and an awesome work by the author considering it is his first book. Hope you keep improving and keep writing. Goodluck.

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Should I Become a Villain?

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Adolf
AdolfLv12Adolf

guess i’ll have to give this a read

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA
AFM31_ALDAAuthorAFM31_ALDA

Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...

Dretno
DretnoLv3Dretno

Thank God! I actually hate harem and don't prefer romance either, so if you don't plan to include any that would be awesome.

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
Undoctored
UndoctoredLv14Undoctored

You‘ve convinced me👍

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
Exo_Man
Exo_ManLv4Exo_Man

No Romance & Harem

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
Danni11
Danni11Lv11Danni11

If there's no romance then it's not my thing :v

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
tortle
tortleLv3tortle

nah man a little bit of romance doesn't hurt, I dont care if it comes later on. (200+)

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
ERROR1122
ERROR1122Lv1ERROR1122

good

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
The_Dream12311
The_Dream12311Lv13The_Dream12311

Thank goodness, I'll give it a try then

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
DoaistDownstairs
DoaistDownstairsLv13DoaistDownstairs

understandable you don't want harem. many authors so ruin their novels with it. In my bio all I have to say is my hatred for harem. Yet recently, I read two novels where the woman weren't entirely braindead. I think one is called "my life simulator system" which I'm now addicted too and the other is "Vampire night life" which is more braindead but not like most and I like Vampires

dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14dylan_pyle

it really does though,a want a true villain.Not a simp."help I'm being attacked" them four words are sign it's being ruined in cultivation novels

tortle:nah man a little bit of romance doesn't hurt, I dont care if it comes later on. (200+)
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

No please romance Mc can be an alpha male No simping included

AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...