Review Detail of RYU_O in The Scarlet Despair of DxD

The second I saw the title I came, only to be disappointed. This thing looks more like an erotic book rather than a novel. The hell with these tags??? I had the very same Idea long ago but I don't have the time nor the ability to write it. I would be reeeeeeally thankful if you took this seriously and make a master piece out of this novel.