The story is getting worse as the time goes by. Here are the idiotic things i have read so far. On the spot finger printing and checking without magnifying glass.. now thats got to be one of the most inefficient way to validate a person identity trying to enter and secured area. The Author just spent 13 chapters explaining how his brothel works. Author would sometimes spend 3 - 4 chapters on sexy time but spends 1 chapter on a battles that supposed to have happened in days.
FerriticMatrix
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LIKEI'm also disapointed with the plot. I came here looking for some medieval novel after finishing this 8.5/10 "I will now take your throne, dear father." and had to drop it after chapter 23. Any suggestions for a medieval king/knight (not eastern) novel with romance? Something with better pacing than this shit?
Honestly I think the author changed. The change and mentions in regards of the whole " morality " stuff also can't be compared to earlier chapters. I think the old author/writer didn't meet deadlines or something and that there's a new one on herald of steel now. Either way, The story is currently just being milked. I'm no longer supporting the work or paying coins to read it on webnovel.