Review Detail of RandomSkill in Herald of Steel

any criticism but still give 4.5 stars or 5 stars which doesn't make any sense. First 100 chapters are a downgrade version of hegemony of the ancient greek. The story focus more on sex scene than plot, character, the world, and story. My evidence is how the detail of a single sex scene can be longer than a battle that end in a single chapter. Conclusion, if writer can focus on the story, battle and detail like how he focus on the sex scene, this story would be a great.