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Review Detail of AJ_Conquer in Herald of Steel

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AJ_Conquer
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This novel has or had so much potential but lately it's sort of going down the drain. The starting of the novel and the world setting is almost a copy of Hegemony of Mediterranean road,but that novel was much better cause that novel didn't have excessive sex scenes which seemed forced right now. Author seems to be less interested in governing or kingdom building and more on sex. Also why is there a temple of Shiva and not a mosque of Allah or Church of Jesus? if you want to use a religious building then use something which is completely fictional. I am thinking o f dropping this novel if things don't improve. I can suggest Author to read more novels on kingdom building with no harem as Harem doesn't really help in story progress.

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AJ_Conquer
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copied from Mediterranean hegemony of Ancient Greece **