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It's a good fanfic but for me it honestly went from 100 to 0 when he left mifuyu all alone while he's doing debauchery and getting girls outside. you could've atleast developed theyre romance first and make her the main wife... So can anyone pleasseeeee tell me what chapter she will appear again ;-; I am just really bias of her cause she deserves better and a more happier ending honestly.

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In the hentai world, I tried a second life(Stopped update and Rewrite)

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Im sorry for that, because the first time i create this fanfic i didnt deep down to romace way only sauce sharing, but after few chapter i do develope a romance, She returning in chapter 15-20 as i remember. i apologize again for your dissapointment in the first 5 to 10 chapter in this Fanfic

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i miss you man , more chapters

Shaywalloppp:Im sorry for that, because the first time i create this fanfic i didnt deep down to romace way only sauce sharing, but after few chapter i do develope a romance, She returning in chapter 15-20 as i remember. i apologize again for your dissapointment in the first 5 to 10 chapter in this Fanfic