Review Detail of Rahaa_1298 in PRIMORDIAL BEING

hello author here !!! I am not planning to add a big Harem for this novel but surely the main character will have 2 to 3 lovers . At present I am focusing on the world development, but also have some adult and erotic scenes among it . plz review the story and also tell me how I can improve the story if required. [ sorry loliconfoever bro, due to my mistake your comment got deleted so I have written the answer ]