Review Detail of TankOnIce in MMORPG: Evolution: A new game

Item: MMORPG: Evolution: A new game
Rating: 5

Review detail

TankOnIceLv11yrTankOnIce

The story's world-building is good, the grammar is acceptable since it's not the author's first language and I imagine this story has good potential as the author is definitely dedicated.

MMORPG: Evolution: A new game

Withe_Reaper

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Withe_ReaperAuthorWithe_Reaper

Thanks for the critiques. And yes English is not my first language, I'm looking to find a proofreader.

1yr