What is the goal of this story? What is the climax? Because as of this writing (Chapter 128), I don't see any significant events. It focuses on their daily life, cooking, going out, Du Yue being clean, gets targeted on, that Du Yue is such a "perceptive" person and would kill anyone who disturbs her peace. The beginning was fun, exciting and looked promising but the middle part just became stagnant for a long time now. No new event or arc is being introduced. I don't know. Maybe you have different ideas but this is not going well IMO.
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