it overall good, also it will be cool if you wright one where the mc has a game designer system and create games like Minecraft, cod, league, Subnautica, or even cyberpunk
Idk that would probly be too much. Mc might become(idk if he already is, kinda not BCS not that op) a Gary Stu character. Games in general are a whole different can of worms and I think if the author is going to make a novel like that he should make a new one and not add it to this.