this is a good story with well thought out plots and good twists, but I major thing that I dislike the most is the constant, nearly every paragraph, switching of he and her for every person who is talking not only the mc but the mom, side character a-z as well. Also with the Mc most of the time his name is switched with Yvonne rather than Ivan. which I thought would go away after chapter 100 but no it is still a problem at chapter 300.
Innocent Angel
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