Review Detail of little_black_horse in The Crazy Couple

The story is quite interesting because it features two different POVs, but some things confused me for a moment (maybe because of the POV usage). If my suggestion is, maybe it can be in the first chapter of Kelly's first POV, in the second chapter of Baby's POV, so it seems more neat, or maybe it can be Kelly's even chapter, Baby's odd chapter is much more interesting. The storyline is interesting, I like it. However, I think the narration is still lacking a lot( maybe adding narration will make the story much more alive) Keep up the good work author!