Review Detail of MansonFD7 in 操你妈
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5 chapter review swap here. It's surprised me from how easy to read/understanding this book is. Despite that, there are several mistakes that I could give you tips to improve your writing: 1. Add more punctuation to each of your paragraphs. 2. Remove the long and unnecessary sentences. 3. Split the long paragraphs into new paragraphs. Overall, it's such a joyful ride that I couldn't stop scrolling back to forth.
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Most of the sentences are to show character interactions and help somewhat in character development. I try to make the paragraphs as short as possible but I'll try to shorten them more. Also, everything becomes better the more indepth you read. Thanks for the review, it helps me become better as a writer 😊❤️