world background is decent character design is average at best story development is also decent writing quality is bad the writing it self is understandable but it is not something that i want to read regularly even if the story is amazing if the writing quality is bad its gonna turn a lot of people away. although i encourage the author to write more and maybe try some free spell checking software its gonna help with the writing quality. thanks for writing the book and i wish the author good luck on their next endeavor
Mr_Chocolate
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