Review Detail of EmmalineFadaini in love story of Lucia and George

Sorry for the 2.8 stars. I would like to be honest with you on this one. People don’t like when they get honest reviews but it is fine if you want me to lie about your work. The way you started your chapter isn’t how you would want to hook your readers. You should read more of top authors work and see how they write theirs. Only that way can you get a contract from WN. Secondly, your dialogues are meant to be on quotation marks (“ “) that way readers pull understand. And you should edit your work. I was confused as I was reading, to be honest. So, please don’t take my review to heart. I was just trying to help and boring scenes will bore readers off. Good luck.