Review Detail of Jeri_ in To Strike A God

The action begins with the very first chapter. 🦋 The female lead doesn’t seem to be emotional at all… Some chapters were perfectly described, but I was reading it with a poker face on… It was well described of what they were doing, not too detailed, and letting us to imagine it for ourselves, yet some parts lacked emotions and some dialogues were too long. I don’t wanna give necessary reference of what this novel reminds me of, but it does a perfect job by standing out. 👏🏻 Work on describing your character’s emotions a little bit more, and don’t rush your story, it seems promising. 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋