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Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceAuthor1yrSheizzcoldasice

This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained. 😊😊

The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!

Sheizzcoldasice

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Is that summer skin kagura?

Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceAuthorSheizzcoldasice

Sure dm me on discord i would gladly share novels i read with you.

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Sheizzcoldasice
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Haha ok I will write here most of novels that are atleast 4stars with harem , you can find most of them on mtlnovel. com or mtlnation . com, here’s the list- I am a gao fushuoi villain,, I became the rich second generation,, the rich second generation villian’s father,, villain: I became a god and billions of protagonist’s tortured and cried ,, Villain: before I died I forcibly kissed the heroine,, The Villain Of The End Of The World: Starting From The Heroine Of Cutting Off The School Flower,, I Was Exposed For Bullying The Empress And Shizun,, Is The Big Villain Crazy, Really Made The Empress Into A Puppet? ,, City: I Started As A Rich Second-Generation Villain,, , Villain: After the Divorced Female President, I Chose My Best Friend,, I'm A Real Villain,, Fantasy: Me! A Destiny Villain,, Villain Seized the Assassin Heroine at the Start!,, I, The Villain, Accidentally Killed The Destined Protagonist,, I, The Villain, Start with the Protagonist Saintess There are many other that i read too but they will have rating btw 3.5-3.9 stars.

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link pls (discord)

Sheizzcoldasice:Sure dm me on discord i would gladly share novels i read with you.
Sin_of_GREED
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i have read almost all of these and few others hence i wanna ask what different or new i can expect from your novel

Sheizzcoldasice: Haha ok I will write here most of novels that are atleast 4stars with harem , you can find most of them on mtlnovel. com or mtlnation . com, here’s the list- I am a gao fushuoi villain,, I became the rich second generation,, the rich second generation villian’s father,, villain: I became a god and billions of protagonist’s tortured and cried ,, Villain: before I died I forcibly kissed the heroine,, The Villain Of The End Of The World: Starting From The Heroine Of Cutting Off The School Flower,, I Was Exposed For Bullying The Empress And Shizun,, Is The Big Villain Crazy, Really Made The Empress Into A Puppet? ,, City: I Started As A Rich Second-Generation Villain,, , Villain: After the Divorced Female President, I Chose My Best Friend,, I'm A Real Villain,, Fantasy: Me! A Destiny Villain,, Villain Seized the Assassin Heroine at the Start!,, I, The Villain, Accidentally Killed The Destined Protagonist,, I, The Villain, Start with the Protagonist Saintess There are many other that i read too but they will have rating btw 3.5-3.9 stars.
Sin_of_GREED
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any reply ?

Sin_of_GREED:i have read almost all of these and few others hence i wanna ask what different or new i can expect from your novel
Tommyshelby
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Is these harem

Sheizzcoldasice:Sure dm me on discord i would gladly share novels i read with you.
Sin_of_GREED
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is this a translation ?

Sheizzcoldasice: Haha ok I will write here most of novels that are atleast 4stars with harem , you can find most of them on mtlnovel. com or mtlnation . com, here’s the list- I am a gao fushuoi villain,, I became the rich second generation,, the rich second generation villian’s father,, villain: I became a god and billions of protagonist’s tortured and cried ,, Villain: before I died I forcibly kissed the heroine,, The Villain Of The End Of The World: Starting From The Heroine Of Cutting Off The School Flower,, I Was Exposed For Bullying The Empress And Shizun,, Is The Big Villain Crazy, Really Made The Empress Into A Puppet? ,, City: I Started As A Rich Second-Generation Villain,, , Villain: After the Divorced Female President, I Chose My Best Friend,, I'm A Real Villain,, Fantasy: Me! A Destiny Villain,, Villain Seized the Assassin Heroine at the Start!,, I, The Villain, Accidentally Killed The Destined Protagonist,, I, The Villain, Start with the Protagonist Saintess There are many other that i read too but they will have rating btw 3.5-3.9 stars.
Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceAuthorSheizzcoldasice

Yes sadly most of villian stories are chineese or korean translations

Sin_of_GREED:is this a translation ?
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so can take this means that this (your novel) is a translation ?!?

Sheizzcoldasice:Yes sadly most of villian stories are chineese or korean translations
Sheizzcoldasice
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No , only first 2-3 chs inspired from other mutiple similar novels rest of it wrote mostly by myself

Sin_of_GREED:so can take this means that this (your novel) is a translation ?!?
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yep i agree say this is original as i don't think i have seen anywhere else where protagonist's inner voice is also projected on heroines

Sheizzcoldasice:No , only first 2-3 chs inspired from other mutiple similar novels rest of it wrote mostly by myself
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and most importantly the way the girls would still getting affected by the plot power into viewing the protagonist as prince charming after listening to both of their inner voice is definitely the most unique aspect of this novel as in all the one i have read there is no such thing happening

Sheizzcoldasice:No , only first 2-3 chs inspired from other mutiple similar novels rest of it wrote mostly by myself
Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceAuthorSheizzcoldasice

Thanks for your detailed review i thought wouldn’t it be interesting to give a fighting chance to heroines when they realise they can hear both party’s opinions but when they will later realise they are still so helpless and powerless against protagonist halo even after knowing his thoughts they cant do much….so even if they dont want to they will still have to find Su Chen cuz only he knows what to do as a result it will push their character to express themselves more which will eventually result in many situations which none of them originally expected, and will make things dyanamic.

Sin_of_GREED:and most importantly the way the girls would still getting affected by the plot power into viewing the protagonist as prince charming after listening to both of their inner voice is definitely the most unique aspect of this novel as in all the one i have read there is no such thing happening
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agreed as in other novels specifically the end stage heroines have no reason to interact with MC except for mostly well i would like to meet him or get angry at him for calling them braindead which while is not bad but it's still pretty far fetched reason compared to that here it would feel quite organic

Sheizzcoldasice:Thanks for your detailed review i thought wouldn’t it be interesting to give a fighting chance to heroines when they realise they can hear both party’s opinions but when they will later realise they are still so helpless and powerless against protagonist halo even after knowing his thoughts they cant do much….so even if they dont want to they will still have to find Su Chen cuz only he knows what to do as a result it will push their character to express themselves more which will eventually result in many situations which none of them originally expected, and will make things dyanamic.
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Asking again is these harem

Sheizzcoldasice:Thanks for your detailed review i thought wouldn’t it be interesting to give a fighting chance to heroines when they realise they can hear both party’s opinions but when they will later realise they are still so helpless and powerless against protagonist halo even after knowing his thoughts they cant do much….so even if they dont want to they will still have to find Su Chen cuz only he knows what to do as a result it will push their character to express themselves more which will eventually result in many situations which none of them originally expected, and will make things dyanamic.
Sheizzcoldasice
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Yess

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Well, I read a certain novel where MC's inner monologue was being projected to heroines without him knowing. I read that novel on this platform.

Sin_of_GREED:yep i agree say this is original as i don't think i have seen anywhere else where protagonist's inner voice is also projected on heroines
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Sin_of_GREED:yep i agree say this is original as i don't think i have seen anywhere else where protagonist's inner voice is also projected on heroines
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bro read the comment against i clearly said protagonist not mc they are different mc is the main character while protagonist is hero/son of haven of world mc resides in as MC's inner voice /thought projection into heroines's mind that has become a common as i have already read about 6-7 novels with this in it

DoubleFacedManX_69:Well, I read a certain novel where MC's inner monologue was being projected to heroines without him knowing. I read that novel on this platform.