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Review Detail of Majer3 in The way of the villain

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Majer3
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This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Edgy dude Mike gets isekai’d into new life in fantasy world with the benefit of new life. Last chains of the humanity goes away with all relatives gone and MC gets good dosage of good ol I go in my way. Only wonder is why this thing doesn't have dark tag. But hey cant complain system story without harem, I take what I can get. -Better start than anyone else has had so far/5. Even without glorious infodump prologue. -Massive review quality with the reader doing the competition participation that I can only wish for because my time goes into the story and this funny little night activity thing here in the forum. -Writer tries to break the fourth wall with humour when introducing the system just to break ice with cold audience who has read tons of system stories/5 (Man overkill is better than no kill) -Realistic honest brutal character this is nice 5/5. -Chances of death 85% / Chances of cool cheat 100% -Ok ok, system, levels please dont use deterministic quests that will tunnel vision the MC with his choices forever.. plz.. attributes... -Edgy guy gets INVISIBILITY/invincibility (if not somehow balanced or OP, both choices equally fine) -Being weak is a sin/I should put this shit in my resume tier stuff. (Okay, you have good thing going on, just dedicate some more attention to world building, character choices that feel like that they are doing any thinking, give side characters also personality of they are working with MC more than few times (it starts get creepy with blank personality tablet in many occasions in many stories world feels like full of NPC at that point, which it might be but we want fantasy and agency here in the stories ;D)

The way of the villain

Choka

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Majer3
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DAAAARKKKK KK AHAAAHAHAHAHAA !!! Darkness arises!

Choka:I appreciate the review, I'll be sure to focus moree on side characters personality etc so the world doesn't feel dull, I'll for sure be dedicating myself and improving the writing quality as good as I can, hope you enjoy what's coming. Oh and I did indeed add the dark tag a week ago haha. Thanks again for your review.
Choka
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I appreciate the review, I'll be sure to focus moree on side characters personality etc so the world doesn't feel dull, I'll for sure be dedicating myself and improving the writing quality as good as I can, hope you enjoy what's coming. Oh and I did indeed add the dark tag a week ago haha. Thanks again for your review.